T1+Persuade

__Tuesday 29 March 2011__   L.I. We are learning make content relevant and add weight to argument by having an effective position statement, main points, evidence and restatement. Contain elaboration of main points.Effective position statement:S.C. we can

  Restatement, elaboration of main points: S.C. We Can
 * make our position and purpose clear
 * use a rhetorical question
 * include a list of fact/evidence that will be discussed in writing

  
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<span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: Times; font-size: medium; line-height: normal;">__Monday 14 March 2011__ <span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: Times; font-size: medium; line-height: normal;"> <span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: Times; font-size: medium; line-height: normal;"> <span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: Times; font-size: medium; line-height: normal;"> <span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: Times; font-size: medium; line-height: normal;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">Tauranga Intermediate School <span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: Times; font-size: medium; line-height: normal;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">Rimu Room 41 30 18th Avenue Tauranga  <span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: Times; font-size: medium; line-height: normal;"> <span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: Times; font-size: medium; line-height: normal;"> <span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: Times; font-size: medium; line-height: normal;"> Monday 14 March 2011  <span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: Times; font-size: medium; line-height: normal;"> <span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: Times; font-size: medium; line-height: normal;"> <span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: Times; font-size: medium; line-height: normal;"> Dear Mr Diver,  <span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: Times; font-size: medium; line-height: normal;"> <span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: Times; font-size: medium; line-height: normal;"><span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">Last Friday we had our extended morning tea because everyone was quick getting back to our classes. Everyone I am sure appreciated the extension in our morning tea. Wouldn’t you as a kid have extended morning teas? I know that you giving us an extended morning tea was very nice of you but the reason why we need to continue having extensions to our morning teas are because the kids will continue to get to class quicker and be ready to learn. By doing this you will encourage the kids to get to class quicker for that extension at the end of the week. If we continue having extensions to our morning teas the kids will get more physical education and fresh air into them which will get their brains working more efficiently. Plus the parents of the kids might see an improvement in their fitness levels. Everyone also might get higher than the national standard in Reading, Mathematics and Writing and other subjects because they are getting more fresh air. The more morning tea time we have the better the kids will be in their sports because they will be running more and getting their fitness levels up. We will be winning more trophies and awards. Our reputation will extend for sports. In my own experience I feel that I am not a very fit kid but if we get the extensions to morning teas then I might grow in confidence and in fitness. The longer morning tea’s we have means that the teachers will have more time to talk and drink their coffees. The teachers can also get stuck into convivial conversation with other teachers. The teachers also need a break from us because 6 hours a day for 5 days a week isn’t enough to get away from us. I hope that you take in of what I said and make a change to our morning teas. Sincerely, Nicholas Jones Room 41 <span style="background-color: transparent; display: block; font-family: Times; font-size: medium; line-height: normal;">

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